Outfit & Shoes
Blue business suit, Tan pantyhose & white stiletto pumps
Unpainted toenails if doable
Scenario
As VIP is driving home from work she sees something very disturbing
Its little BILLY on his front porch
She holler out HEY BILLY is Your MOM HOME YET?…………OK GET IN You ARE COMING HOME WITH ME!……..NO YOU’RE NOT STaYING HERE BY YOURSELF iITS NOT SAFE….NOW COME ON AND GET IN THe CAR!
We follow Billy as he runs around and climbs in VIP tells him to buckle his seat belt
She puts it in drive romps down on the accelerator and nothing
She works it a few times before she realizes the motor has died
She puts it in park twists the key no catch she twists it again and all she gets is the raspberry
She assures Billy it will start as she begins the cranking and pumping marathon
She makes several attempts but all she gets in return is the raspberries
She assures Billy it will be okay but Billy doesn’t seem to care but does not let it show
After a few more attempts her feet start to hurt so pulls off her pumps and hands them to Billy and before she twists the key she says DONT SNIFF MY SHOE……IT COULD MAKE U PASs OUT……YOU SILLY LITTLE BOy
She tries cranking and pumping in her stocking feet and then the starter gets slower as the battery gets weaker
She then tells Billy I KNOW YOU SMELL GAs WHAT DO YOU THINK ThIS CAR RUNS ON COAL?!!!
One last desperate attempt and it’s hopeless
She tells Billy just sit tight and I will call my neighbor JIMMY and see if he can come save us
As the PTP logo comes up she is punching in his #
Angles
Start outside shooting on drivers side as she pulls up and hollers at Billy from the driver window
Then have the camera move around the back of car and entering the passenger side like how a boy would do so
Show angles like how a little boy would watch his babysitter cranking a car
A lot of leg-well and a few close ups of VIP facial expressions and quietly pleading for the motor to turnover and one or two of her hand twisting the key
rickdawg73 (verified owner) –
Love the whole scenario..similar to carpooling with your friend’s mom back in the day. Pumping action and Vivian are 5 stars but my 4 star rating is mainly for dialogue. It seems awkward once “Billy” gets in and Vivian just kind of gives him a blank stare and tries to leave. Could have been some better interaction (if we’re to assume “Billy” is a school age kid). Overall enjoyed this. Good work!